案例1

[原稿]

Simulation experiments show that detection texture of the proposed method is clear, texture is coherent, and the processing time, entropy and average gradient index is better than other algorithms.

[修改稿]

Simulation experiments show that detection texture of the proposed method is clear, texture is coherent, and the processing time, entropy and average gradient index is better than that of  other algorithms.

[分析]

than前后对比的应该是对等的内容,此处对比的不是算法,缺少that of。

 

案例2

[原稿]

Image texture local binary detection model is established by amplitude, symbols and gray, standard deviation is chosen to describe texture complexity for gray in the neighborhood.

[修改稿]

Image texture local binary detection model is established by amplitude, symbols and gray, and standard deviation is chosen to describe texture complexity for gray in the neighborhood

[分析]

两个句子之间不能简单罗列,必须要有连接词连接,此处缺失and连词。

 

案例3

[原稿]

中文摘要:建立了量子多阶环形结构,每个量子不仅可以与自身环沟通,还可以与不同阶的环沟通,每个量子可以选择自身左右相连的两个量子作为邻居,也可以在相邻环上随机选择其他量子作为邻居,其选择相邻环或者跨环上的数量随机决定。

Quantum multi-order ring structure is established. Each quantum can communicate with rings of both its own order and other orders, so each quantum can choose two quanta which are connected or located at other rings as its neighbors and the number of quanta which choose other rings’ quanta as its neighbors is determined randomly.

[修改稿]

Quantum multi-order ring structure is established. Each quantum can communicate with rings of both its own order and other orders, so each quantum can choose its two adjacent quanta or other random quanta located at adjacent rings as its neighbors.The number of selected rings, including adjacent ring and nonadjacent ring, is determined randomly.

[分析]

英文摘要翻译不正确,最后一句是环的数量随机决定,而非量子的数量随机决定。